I cannot comment on your Soundcloud page. Check if your track is private. 1) proceed in order by structuring your ideas in a sort of list: "there are many things... the first one is... the second one is... etc." 2) At some point you say "but I think that..." but you don't really argument against what you said before 3) Another VS other. We say "other people" not "another people"Your answer is full of information and ideas... remember to structure it well. PS. it doesn't have to be that long either. Keep up the good work, Teodora! :)
I cannot comment on your Soundcloud page. Check if your track is private.
ReplyDelete1) proceed in order by structuring your ideas in a sort of list: "there are many things... the first one is... the second one is... etc."
2) At some point you say "but I think that..." but you don't really argument against what you said before
3) Another VS other. We say "other people" not "another people"
Your answer is full of information and ideas... remember to structure it well. PS. it doesn't have to be that long either.
Keep up the good work, Teodora! :)