Well done, Katy! Your answer is full of valid examples and long enough. Tip: when you structure using first of all, secondly, etc... continue the pattern. You say only "first of all". Also, pay attention to the difference between learn/teach, colleges/colleagues. Very range (improvise, audience, stage). Keep up the good work! ;)
Well done, Katy! Your answer is full of valid examples and long enough. Tip: when you structure using first of all, secondly, etc... continue the pattern. You say only "first of all". Also, pay attention to the difference between learn/teach, colleges/colleagues. Very range (improvise, audience, stage). Keep up the good work! ;)
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